Hey! Good effort..but i think the melody was abit too rushed and stressed...like ..i didnt really get the hang of it if you know what i mean! Maybe a bit too complicated or something for the floor.
And also the break came alittle bit sudden.
BUT...all in all..like produce wise it sounded pretty good

Keep up with the good work!
And oh..btw..how did you make that shm-type-percussion?